Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
It is generally believed that people need to a little varieties in their work to create a suitable condition. The most persuasive point is that to do some uninform tasks by workers lead to feel boring in during their day. Nevertheless, to do many different type of tasks are much more pleasant for them. There are numerous reasons why workers would like to some different tasks in their work place, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.
In the beginning, the first aspect to point out that the variety of activity is one of the important reasons for changing mood. Moreover, all of workers need to do some tasks that make them feel great. For example, I remembered when I worked in a big company as manager where I had to do many uniform tasks, and hardly had I did some different tasks; however, I liked my job. Beside, my colleague suggested changing my duties in during day. In practically, he told me that I could go to inside the company to work beside other workers, by this way, not only I could check condition of work's environment, but also I could manage how my workers did their tasks. Finally, I was satisfied of my activity in during the day; nevertheless, I could control the condition of my company.
Second, I would like mention another benefit of doing no similar tasks by workers. I think that this issue helps them to increase of their motivation. Give this issue, if managers dedicate to their workers who do different tasks, they would cause to become better the approach of their workers. For instance, my friend always could not concentrate on her work owing to the condition of her office, so she asked of her manger to change her activity in office. After that, what they had guessed about the approach of office was so amazing because of increasing amount of activity them in during a workday. Hence, this matter pokes the path for satisfying employments.
From what has been discussed above, we may safely reach the conclusion that the kind of tasks that to do by workers how can help them to their approach; therefore, there are some merits that regarding for this matter such as improving activity of workers, and increasing amount of pleasant workers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'variety'?
Suggestion: variety
...y believed that people need to a little varieties in their work to create a suitable cond...
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Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...n during their day. Nevertheless, to do many different type of tasks are much more pleasant fo...
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Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becoming'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: becoming
...ho do different tasks, they would cause to become better the approach of their workers. F...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h; therefore, there are some merits that regarding for this matter such as impro...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70025839793 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53875936117 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511627906977 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6066219959 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7647058824 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.52941176471 5.45110844103 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268186304267 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926690380447 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833552435583 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161214361431 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584902868343 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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