Life expectancy is increasing for men and women
In the last few decades, medical science has done phenomenon improvements and achieved new heights. With the advancement of new medicines, people are living longer and healthier. This essay will demonstrate various facts, figures, advantages and demerits of increasing life expectancy.
To begin with, nowadays, people are more aware and a plethora of health-related knowledge is available on social media, blogs and magazines. In recent years, scientists have invented various new medicines to cure the incurable diseases and the governments are continuously pumping a tremendous amount of money into hospitals and medical research for the betterment of citizens. For example, Polio, a deadly disease was dominant in India in 1980 but in 2010, the government has declared India Polio free country. On the other side, forty years back life expectancy was at 50-60 years which has increased to 80 years.
Due to the higher life expectancy, many cities around the world are surrounded by old people which need greater care, better facility and pension. To support them the government needs more money for medicines and housing, which in results are increasing unemployment.
To sum it up, with proceeding arguments it is safe to state that life expectancy is helping people to live longer with their loved ones but can burden environment and exponential resource consumption drastically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 20.9802955665 29% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 216.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45833333333 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91385446437 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662037037037 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8143283964 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.9 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 7.25397266985 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19617994823 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677875999387 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597888617147 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107948167443 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236448268993 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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