Dear Igor,
I hope the letter finds you in the best of health. I feel the need to bring the fact of me moving away from the neighborhood to your knowledge. Allow me to elaborate on the details.
As you know, I have been preparing for the Civil Services Examination and I was finally selected in Police Services Cadre. I am sorry that I did not inform you the moment I go to know it. Everything happened so quickly and the news of my selection came as a huge surprise to me as my name was not on the first list. Some candidates have reappeared for the examination to change their cadre and seeing that the same cadre was allotted to them, they gave up their seat and as a result, I was asked to report.
Moreover, it is not easy for me to leave this lovely neighbourhood. But, I am constrained to move due to my professional commitments and to move ahead in life. I am going to miss the long walks with other aspirants from different fields who are in pursuit to land their dream job. I will also miss the overnight study session we used to hold together with the other people of the locality and last but not the least your coffee.
Furthermore, my moving away does not mean that we will not be seeing each other anymore. I am moving into the Civil Lines area where to government has a quarter for the officers. You are invited to my new house next week. I will be desperately waiting for you to show up. Please do not disappoint me.
I hope to see you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Igor, I hope the letter finds you in the best ...
^^^
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hope to see you soon. Yours sincerely, Brad Jason
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, i feel, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 283.0 206.0 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31448763251 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49603063624 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575971731449 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7526811391 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8333333333 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7222222222 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189984009316 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615813685555 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05312103288 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107531999721 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430267173517 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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