While few nations lift the spirits of youth to work part-time and believe that it will be beneficial, others contradict. Is doing side-job good thing or bad thing? In my opinion, opting for a part-time job is certainly beneficial. In this essay, we will discuss both perspectives and throw light on how part-time jobs are an added advantage to teenagers.
On one hand, doing side-jobs is being invigorated. Firstly, this helps in building earning ability, practical knowledge and develop a sense of responsibility. Secondly, it serves as a medium to inculcate interpersonal skills as well as life skills, which play a prominent role in their career. For example, in countries like USA and Canada both governments and parents buoy up teens to go for temporary jobs and pay for their tuition fees. This not only widens career and livelihood opportunities to young, but also serves in soaring up their national income. Finally, the consequences are both country and its people enjoy development and prosperity.
On the other hand, there are nations where young generations are still not being given a shot in the arm to choose any odd jobs while studying. To begin with, their main focal point here is that parents compel children on spending much of their time in studying, so that they can achieve high paying jobs and better positions in the future and feel that part-time jobs are time-waste. Furthermore, the government also do not stress on the importance of side-jobs. For instance, in countries like India,and Nepal, parents stress their children to spend most of the time in school mugging up bundles of books. Although, in reality, part-time jobs are phenomenal, parents in such countries feel that doing odd jobs is a black mark on their status and believe that there wouldn't be dignity of labor. Consequently, youth do not start earning until they complete their Bachelor's degree or Post Graduation which results in lot of young people staying unemployed looking for getting hired in Multi National Company or higher paying roles. Finally, this situation is attributable towards lower national incomes and sluggish national development.
To conclude, side jobs are considered as a plus point in some nations. On contrary to that, this idea is being disregarded in few other countries. The reason for this, in my opinion, is that the notion of doing a part-time job is neither widely analysed nor well-established in those countries. Additionally, these countries are influenced by outdated culture, customs and insights of local social groups. However, I strongly believe part-time jobs serve as a perquisite to youth, and as said earlier, they contribute in rising the standards of both nation and individuals as well. In this case, the advantages of side-jobs outweigh disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2352.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 454.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18061674009 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88464527552 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 176.041082164 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561674008811 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 707.4 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9504271485 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.260869565 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7391304348 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13043478261 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23214123029 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722723682361 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058293871328 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165015788907 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758544347959 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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