the most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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In this statement the authors main focus on the money. In this stat...
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In this statement the authors main focus on the money. In this statement The a...
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In this statement the authors main focus on the money. In this statement ...
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...s saying that for any person who get his job is only for earn money.here the auth...
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...ntion about persons intrest or passion.In this statement we can not directly take...
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...ntion about persons intrest or passion.In this statement we can not directly take...
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...t we can not directly take any possitive or negative.Because its both side is rig...
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...rectly take any possitive or negative.Because its both side is right at some point.so...
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...s right at some point.so in this passage i am going to explain both side of this ...
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...ide of this statment and explain how it change at some point. First,i...
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... this statment and explain how it change at some point. First,it i...
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...explain how it change at some point. First,it is true that money is one of th...
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...ge at some point. First,it is true that money is one of the esent...
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...irst,it is true that money is one of the esential part in this world to survive...
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...at money is one of the esential part in this world to survive.If we want to live...
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Suggestion: If
...sential part in this world to survive.If we want to live in this world money is ...
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...sential part in this world to survive.If we want to live in this world money is ...
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...to live in this world money is needed. so if a person is doing his job for a mon...
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...ve in this world money is needed. so if a person is doing his job for a money it...
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...is job for a money it is not a bad idea.He/she do job for a money beacause he/sh...
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Suggestion: does
...for a money it is not a bad idea.He/she do job for a money beacause he/she need ...
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...money it is not a bad idea.He/she do job for a money beacause he/she need money.f...
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Suggestion: ,
...y beacause he/she need money.for example , my friend has one job . in his job he...
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...oney.for example , my friend has one job . in his job he earns three hundrad dol...
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....for example , my friend has one job . in his job he earns three hundrad dollers...
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...le , my friend has one job . in his job he earns three hundrad dollers per month...
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... dollers per month.by doing this job for five or six month , one other componey o...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...nth.by doing this job for five or six month , one other componey offered him four h...
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...y doing this job for five or six month , one other componey offered him four hun...
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...ney offered him four hundred dollers for doing same job.he accepted it. when i as...
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...r doing same job.he accepted it. when i asked him for reson for changing a job ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun person seems to be countable; consider using: 'many people', 'many persons'.
Suggestion: many people; many persons
... money at other componey.this show that many person has most important aspect of job is m...
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...ther componey.this show that many person has most important aspect of job is mone...
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... aspect of job is money not knowledge. secondly,all the time money is not the m...
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...ob is money not knowledge. secondly,all the time money is not the main aspe...
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...ney not knowledge. secondly,all the time money is not the main aspect f...
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... is not the main aspect for doing job. many of people are also in this world that t...
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... that they prefar their passion or hobby as a job. this type of person has main f...
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...efar their passion or hobby as a job. this type of person has main focous on their...
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...n focous on their job not money.they are onle doing their job for gatting more kn...
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...re knowledge from what they are doing. money is secondry part of their job.i can giv...
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...g. money is secondry part of their job.i can give you one example of my own life...
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... can give you one example of my own life experince.my brother completed his maste...
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...ter degree in mechanical engineering but he intrested in wild life photography.h...
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...anical engineering but he intrested in wild life photography.he choose photogra...
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... intrested in wild life photography.he choose photography though he can earn more m...
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...he choose photography though he can earn more money in field of engineering.this ...
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...s is show that all the time money is not more important then a job.its only depen...
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... the time money is not more important then a job.its only depend on the persons w...
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...hen a job.its only depend on the persons way of thinking. if you do your work w...
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...epend on the persons way of thinking. if you do your work with passion or with ...
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...the persons way of thinking. if you do your work with passion or with a full of...
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...assion or with a full of joy then it is conform that you can easily earn money. ...
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...or with a full of joy then it is conform that you can easily earn money. ...
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...form that you can easily earn money. in conclusion ,i only want to say that d...
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... you can easily earn money. in conclusion ,i only want to say that do ...
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Suggestion: ,
...ly earn money. in conclusion ,i only want to say that do your job with...
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...ay that do your job with passion or with full of energy.do not work for money, wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5406824147 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48916379833 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482939632546 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.657217078 48.9658058833 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.166666667 100.406767564 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.75 20.6045352989 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 28.0 4.53405017921 618% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 59.0 5.5376344086 1065% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329676207644 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149798244957 0.076458572812 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941803947959 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112545309552 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129907292334 0.0645574589148 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 58.1214874552 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.