The given diagrams depict an information about the process in which cement is made and than how it be used in construction purposes.
Overall, basically is prepared by four main stages, which initial ingredients are limestone and clay, and it begins from crushing ends to begging. Moreover, cement accounts for about 15 percent allocation in order to make a construction substance.
From the firs diagram, after crushing process of limestone and clay the made powder passes to mixer which initial phase of rotating under heating. Thus, pre final stage is squeeze the mixed substance. Eventually, the product gone into bagging and completely ready for usage.
According to second picture, the half proportion of rudimentary construction substance consist of gravel, whereas approximately 15 and 10 percent allocation account for cement and water. In addition other remaining proportion of this substance actually is sand. Moreover, all the mentioned components are made due to concrete mixer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: AND_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...the process in which cement is made and than how it be used in construction purposes...
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Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...in which cement is made and than how it be used in construction purposes. Overall...
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Line 4, column 190, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...cation account for cement and water. In addition other remaining proportion of this subs...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, moreover, second, thus, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51633986928 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86293908078 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660130718954 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7588702804 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7777777778 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192768275854 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691335118901 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746308947602 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121422306185 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767951739959 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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