Some people believe that internet will be help in traditional book in future Do you think it would be possitive or negative development and give your opinion
Internet and books are serious contender of each other personality some folks assert that traditional books are luckrative for future with the help of internet here this essay eleborate merits and demrits with mu own preception
There are manifold points of this phenomena first and foremost internet save precious time and money of folks for example when peples go to market they buy books on high rate and also waste their quality time but with the help of internet peoples can buy books on effordable prices and save their time furthermore,administration spend levishly on constructed library where as there is no need of this fund in the presense of e-book thus goverment use their fund in other perorities
Moreover,it is also caused defroestation To illustrate, a number of trees are cut down for making paper which effect on enviroment thus e-book can be use to overcome this problem
On the flip side it has darker side initially, it also effect on employment To demostrate,if e-book will be provide in future it adverse effect will be appear on writers and publisher and they will be jobless they have no work to do in future beside it, it also effects on peoples eyes because if they read book on electronic gadgets such as laptops computers smart phones and so on these display are silver screen as a result they their eye sight and also effect on their health
To recapitulate, both side have their own importance negative effect of the internet will be over taken possitive effect
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Comments
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Sir if i gave papers how much band i get in writing
It is hard to know the exact
It is hard to know the exact band by this essay. The main issues of the essay are:
1. not enough content. so put more content next time.
2. not enough punctuation marks. don't forget comma or period for sentences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , administration
...e prices and save their time furthermore,administration spend levishly on constructed library w...
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...n spend levishly on constructed library where as there is no need of this fund in the pr...
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Suggestion:
...rment use their fund in other perorities Moreover,it is also caused defroestation...
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Suggestion: , it
...heir fund in other perorities Moreover,it is also caused defroestation To illust...
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...Moreover,it is also caused defroestation To illustrate, a number of trees are cut...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...effect on enviroment thus e-book can be use to overcome this problem On the fli...
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Line 4, column 152, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...effect on enviroment thus e-book can be use to overcome this problem On the fli...
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...book can be use to overcome this problem On the flip side it has darker side init...
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Suggestion: effects
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Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89803921569 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8268498994 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564705882353 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 255.0 20.2975951904 1256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1249.0 106.682146367 1171% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 255.0 20.7667163134 1228% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 88.0 7.06120827912 1246% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247541184857 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.247541184857 0.084324248473 294% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135710802895 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474555337395 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 129.1 13.0946893788 986% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -187.35 50.2224549098 -373% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 102.7 11.3001002004 909% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.62 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.0 8.58950901804 233% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 104.0 10.1190380762 1028% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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