In some countries, the number of shooting massacres increases because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ? Give specific reason and examples to support your answer.
It is irrefutable to say that the mass scooting has increased in the countries which has liberated in keeping weapons like handgun for personalsaftey. However, there are some who oppose to the notion , i believe in the former statement and believe having gun has lead to this grim reality. In the following essay reason for increase in the crime because of self protected gun and examples to support the case will be discussed to deduce to a reasonable conclusion.
To begin with, many countries has legalized gun at home for personal security. This legalization has at times increased crime rate , for example in United States, where hand guns are issued by the government for those who want to use it for personal saftey. Furthermore, aforementioned statement has also been verified by a research conducted by FBI department in Illions state where the percentage of massacres has increased from 10 percent in last decade when the legalization went viral.
Moreover, many schools and colleges are under the trap of this massacres and recently around 15 teenager’s dies in one of this misfortune mass shooting in Mississippi. Even though, shooting in school have increased, at places like Alaska keeping a gun is recommended because those places are prone to wildlife.
To recapitulate, having guns for personal use has many advantages but proper use and keeping it out of reach of children and using it for solving personal fight should be avoided.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12552301255 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93487445384 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585774058577 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.4183011955 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.111111111 104.977214359 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5555555556 20.9669160288 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55555555556 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246004804497 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103315224732 0.0925447433944 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474901085721 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139478545794 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524907056434 0.0609392437508 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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