You need to attend a family event. Your child will be missing school for a day. Write a letter to the school principal and say–
1- What is the event?
2- Why is it important for your child to be there?
3- How will your child make up
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to inform you that my son won`t be able to attend the school day on next Monday due to our commitment with a family occasion.
I invited my parents to stay with us during this month, and they will arrive the city this Sunday. When I was doing all my parents` visit arrangement, I realized that their wedding anniversary is on the coming Monday. Hence, I invited all other family to celebrate this special occasion with them. It will be an extremely memorable moment with a sentimental value to my parents
I have read that attending family events are very important for children, and they understand many values out of it. Therefore, it will be an amazed chance to spend some quality time with his grandmother and grandfather. My son will learn also that love continues ever after between a couple.
Some lessons will be missed on Monday, but I can taut it to my son at home. I would therefore request that you tell me the Monday lessons and any other home work need to be done to enable him catch it up with the next school day. It will be very useful to not miss any lesson with his class.
I look forward to receiving the lessons list.
Yours sincerely,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ssons list. Yours sincerely, Ayoub
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62100456621 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48694596472 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625570776256 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2197453603 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234138478962 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827824249667 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578840436304 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110624914141 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698482457354 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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