The large shopping malls should replace the small local shop.
The debate over the issue of whether the large shopping malls should replace the small shop is an old one, with attitude of people shifting throughout the debate over the years. Proponents and opponents make there cases to support their viewpoints on this unresolved issue. In this essay, there will be examination of both sides of contention, before deducing an even handal conclusion.
There are numerous arguments surrounding my viewpoints but the most important factor that needs to be considered relates to that big shopping malls provide batter facility then local shop. In mall have batter security system like parking so on. in other words, we can say that in malls we can get everything under one roof. Moreover, large shopping malls pay tax more then local shops as well as malls helps to increase job opportunity for youth
Another key justification for upholding this notion is that the large shopping malls are taking bread out of the mouth of the local shopkeepers. In other words, bargaining on products can also be done at local shops because products are not market with fix price.
To conclude, in light of above discussion it is quite fair and justifiable to say that shopping malls advantage outweigh disadvantage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...other words, we can say that in malls we can get everything under one roof. Moreo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, well, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 205.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05853658537 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63001482682 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643902439024 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 379.143842365 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.905144484 50.4703680194 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.222222222 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.50274370962 0.242375264174 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161325790557 0.0925447433944 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151332012585 0.071462118173 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263380783114 0.151781067708 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688323975793 0.0609392437508 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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