he two figures below show the rate of criminal convictions among men and women of different ages in the UK and the proportion of male and female prison inmates in the British prison system.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the graph provided reveals the borrowing ratio data for the Royal Bank of Scotland, during the period from 2012 to 2022.
Overall, it could be plainly viewed that the Y-axis presents the amount of borrowings. And X-axis shows the period of years. According to the legend student loans considered as the highest rate. Conversely, personal loans was the lowest rate.
Getting back to the details, student loans started with 1500 during the year of 2012 and started then to increase.in 2022 world made of approximately 2500 or so. Mortgages which considered as the second amount of achievement started with around 900, and it will achieve about 1800 in 2022.
In stark contrast, however auto loans rapid ups and downs, in 2012 was about 700 and it will end up with the around 600 and 2022. As well as personal loans slightly stable in 2012 it was 400 by far, and then started to increase and decrease, in 2022 made up 420 or so.
- The line graph shows the past and projected borrowings for The Royal Bank of Scotland Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 52
- he two figures below show the rate of criminal convictions among men and women of different ages in the UK and the proportion of male and female prison inmates in the British prison system.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feat 11
- the two figures below show the rate of criminal convictions among men and women of different ages in the UK and the proportion of male and female prison inmates in the British prison system Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main fea 58
- The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 11
- The line graph shows the past and projected borrowings for The Royal Bank of Scotland.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, however, second, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70481927711 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36513880149 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572289156627 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6585177217 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7777777778 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0187752313495 0.215688989381 9% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0140028798046 0.103423049105 14% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0200690531801 0.0843802449381 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0129714327033 0.15604864568 8% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022467180489 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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