People are less fit and active nowadays than in the past, what are the reasons for this? What do you think can be done for it?
The number of physically unfit people and patients is aggressively increasing whereas people in the past used to be more energetic and fit. The key factors behind this upsetting trend is unawareness and unhealthy lifestyle to survive in socially competitive society. In my opinion, general awareness about the significance of exercise and free physical training facilities can effectively control the numbers.
The key reason for the ignorance towards health is the blind race for money to establish social dominance in the society. Unfortunately, a person with a lot of money is considered as more successful than a physical healthy person, which is actually a true wealth. Furthermore, there has been excessive dependency on technology, which offers everything at doorstep, and consumption of fast food has made people lethargic and obese. For instance, most of the youths spend their time in front of computers while eating unhealthy food. Thus, it is really our lifestyle to blame for our unfitness.
The most effective and efficient solution is to teach younger generation about the importance of health and how to maintain it. Furthermore, authorities can run general awareness campaign on the internet and TV, to encourage people towards healthy lifestyle and serious consequence of negligence. Moreover, a part of health care budget should be allocated to set up fitness centers, which provides services for free of cost to motivate more people. For example, when India had set up free workout and heath assessment centers, the number of sufferers at clinic started to decrease exponentially. As precaution is better than cure, this is an ideal approach to fix the issue from the root.
In Conclusion, unawareness and excessive reliance on technology as well as fast food is the key reason behind increasing number of unfit and inactive people. It can be effectively suppressed by proper physical education and governments initiatives to construct more fitness centers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38906752412 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99774697158 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572347266881 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1559151078 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.733333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204761976346 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628086151752 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437788232464 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118203965642 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02041916974 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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