Dear Amit,
I want to say thank you for the hospitality you do on vacations. It was a fun and, a memorable trip. Now, I feel that it was a right decision to spend our holidays together at your place. I like interior as well as location of your house. Really, it was pleasant stay.
Hoever, as you know that none of our trip finish with having any problem. I'm writing to say that I forget my wallet at your home because of the hurry to catch the train. It will be in your TV room, where I took credit card from it to book my tickets. It must be on the table which is at the corner. It is very precious to me as it is gifted by my uncle.
It'd be great if you can find it and parcel to me at my hostal address. But, make sure to cross check address before writing it down, as some of the important documents are in it.
Please get back me as soon as possible.
See you soon
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ur trip finish with having any problem. Im writing to say that I forget my wallet ...
^^
Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...be on the table which is at the corner. It is very precious to me as it is gifted ...
^^
Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...heck address before writing it down, as some of the important documents are in it. Pleas...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, well, i feel, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 5.60731707317 660% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 712.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.0 4.92477711251 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11570378354 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634831460674 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3532711055 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 50.8571428571 112.824112599 45% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.7142857143 22.9334400587 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 5.23603664747 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260286857148 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783748595067 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793290767554 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118078338758 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803706900218 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.8 13.2329268293 29% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 93.14 61.2550243902 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 10.3012195122 32% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.03 11.4140731707 44% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.27 8.06136585366 78% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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