In today's world, it is a point of consistent debate among contemporary people on whether young people have more fun in their lives or the older people enjoy more. I believe that young person are the one who enjoy their life more than older persons.
First and foremost, the reason behind this view can be traced to the physical strength. The age, being on the side of young persons, makes them live their life to the full potential. They are full of energy and zeal. For instance, my grandfather is fond of travelling. He often tells me stories about how much he used to travel during his youth. And, how the old age has made him weak that he is not able to pursue his hobby anymore. He often admits that he doesn't enjoy the life as much as he used to.
Besides this, the attitude of showing off that the young people have with or without their will in modern society makes them enjoy their lives more actually. Today, people, specially the youth, is so much fascinated and involved in social media and gadgets that he wants to enjoy his life to show off to others and compete with them. Example of my friend, here, will shed more light on this. He checks in to social media whenever he visits a new place or go to a club or go to watch a movie. One day, I asked him about why does he always show this off. He said other people around him also do such stuff so he also has to behave like this to show them that he is also a fun loving person.
Lastly, today's youth has more money at his disposal. This was not the case earlier when people used to be limited to working in the same place all their lives. Globalization has shorten the borders between countries in a way that people are earning more money by getting oppurtunities to work in gobal companies and that too at young ages. The working age was more earlier but now, even the college going students try to get a part time job in parallel with their college classes. Old people know the value of money as they had to work very hard to get it and thus they are often reluctant in spending it on their enjoyment.
In a nutshell, the physical strength, show off attitude and more pocket of today's youth enables them to have more fun in their lives in comparison to the old people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... hobby anymore. He often admits that he doesnt enjoy the life as much as he used to. ...
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Line 7, column 179, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'shortened'.
Suggestion: shortened
...lace all their lives. Globalization has shorten the borders between countries in a way ...
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Line 7, column 361, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'earlier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: earlier
... too at young ages. The working age was more earlier but now, even the college going student...
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Line 7, column 428, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...the college going students try to get a part time job in parallel with their college clas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, if, lastly, so, thus, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32701421801 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14007676802 2.67179642975 80% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8012997868 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9523809524 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0952380952 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316141877326 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909532690049 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118711476713 0.0737576698707 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2052216523 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.192335430657 0.0645574589148 298% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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