Nowadays, interactions among different countries are becoming increasingly frequent with the rapid globalization. Many people argued that this trend makes one country losing its own features and becoming more similar with others. In my opinion, more benefit than problems will surface with this trend.
Admittedly, the victory of globalization all over the world has resulted in a twilight existence of countless indigenous cultures and traditions, which are vanishing at an astonishing rate. Having easy access to other colorful culture, young people tend to ignore their own traditional activities and adopting the foreign lifestyles. For example, with the development of computer technology, the spread of Western festivals has emerged as a common phenomenon for many people in Eastern countries to forget their own traditional festival.
Nevertheless, the benefit in terms of economy brought by economic globalization should not be overlooked. This trend does facilitate the economic development in many undeveloped countries of the Third World. By interacting with other industrial countries, they can attract enormous overseas investment. In addition, a small world also enables they exporting their own traditional craft goods to other country or import new technology from developed countries.
Moreover, there are also positive influences brought by globalization in education and medical care. Having more opportunities to communicate with foreign add more clear pictures about the world to young students, which benefit their performance and enable them to study at foreign universities easily. On the other hand, with the help of better medical support, poverty counties might get rid of health hazard and increase residents’ life expectancy.
In conclusion, globalization is an inevitable prospect, and the positive influences of which outweigh the negative.
- Some people say that charity organizations are established to aid the people in a great need, no matter where they live, however some agree that they should support their own country first discuss and state your views. 61
- Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- In some countries governments pay the money for students’ university fees，while in other countries, students pay for themselves. Do advantages of governments paying for the students outweigh its disadvantages？ 67
- Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, third, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90145985401 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10967966586 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627737226277 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5307265654 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198694583108 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671151485454 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625057454965 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10265909537 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599636921748 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.94 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.