Today large shopping center and supermarkets are more common than small local shops. Is this a negative or positive development?
Supermarket and shopping centres have gain enormous popularity over the past few decades due to a range of conveniences they provide. I definitely believe this trend is a positive one.
Firstly, shopping malls and super markets supply consumers with a wide range of products which is absolutely convenient for shoppers as they can choose among different brands before purchasing items that suit their needs best which they can hardly achieve this satisfaction when they shop at smaller stores. Besides, they can obtain almost every thing they want in one mall that help them save a lot of time.
Secondly, the quality of goods in supermarkets and shopping centres are much more trustworthy than those from traditional outlets or open markets. Because these large stores only cooperate with the suppliers who can provide products with premium quality and at a reasonable price. Thus, end users gain many benefits as the suppliers will try to improve their product quality to meet the market demand, and as the result, they can expand the market share.
Lastly, large shopping centres also provide various recreational activities for children and adults other than merely selling goods. In other words, shoppers can enjoy children playground or go in to movie theatres inside these shopping malls. Therefore, these large malls will get an increase in returning visits.
In conclusion, I believe the popularity of supermarkets and shopping centres is the positive growth since they offer wide range of commodities, reasonable price and high quality products with satisfying experience for customers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39285714286 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64497448431 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623015873016 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.9265988792 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.545454545 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14549613733 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634755861168 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461544252372 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884884589757 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266869634799 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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