Over the past few decades, there has been a high degree of ambivalence over this matter whether doctors, nurses and teachers should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. This has elicited stimulated disputation among the public. Whereas some people favor to pay them more for their great contribution to society I sanguinely believe that they should not. This essay will further elaborate reasons to support this notion and then deduce a logical conclusion.
At the outset, conspicuously, there are myriads of reasons to support this notion but one of the most compelling reason is that everyone once in a while needs services of the Doctors, Nurses, and Teachers, hence, their service should never be expensive like sport and entertainment personalities. For example, It would easy for the rich class to pay the high price but the lower income group and poor class will not be able to match the price.
On the contrary, there are skeptics who conjecture that Doctors, nurses, and teachers make a great contribution hence they should be paid more than sport and entertainment personalities. Although this seems ostensibly veridical this is not the only thing to be considered to charge the high wages. They should be reachable to the masses and moreover, their services are such noble no price can justify the amount.
After analyzing the above facts I would like to recapitulate that, even though doctors, nurses and teachers ado contribute greater then sports and entertainment start they still need to be in the reach of the normal population, hence their wages should be with the limit or the general population.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, still, then, whereas, while, for example, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14179104478 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78955782883 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559701492537 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.6214721863 50.4703680194 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.8 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 20.9669160288 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311956995955 0.242375264174 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121697295508 0.0925447433944 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122831408422 0.071462118173 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198143366902 0.151781067708 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503448420459 0.0609392437508 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 12.6369458128 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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