Dear Sir,
I am writing you to inquire about the suitcase which i have lost on 22nd January in the A9456 Delhi flight. Actually, when the flight has arrived in Manglore airport my suitcase did not come out. Instantly, i complained at the office and emailed the details.
The bag is new and medium sized with its brand name ' JJ ' written on the top center. The handle itself has a golden case and it is number locked. There is only few accessories,a brand new packed mobile phone and some documents. Actually the documents are very important,related to my Job. I got a good support from your information center but no further contact from your officials. Actually, i am disappointment because i do not get any details regarding this.
So, i need to know the current status of my complaint and wish to hear the updates. Here i mentioned my contact details to keep in touch with. Please make the necessary as soon as possible.
I look forward to hear from you.
Akshaya
0011-36544
- You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do abo 73
- You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do abo 73
- You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do abo 73
- You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do abo 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Actually
... 22nd January in the A9456 Delhi flight.Actually, when the flight has arrived in Manglor...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Instantly
...re airport my suitcase did not come out.Instantly, i complained at the office and emailed...
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Line 1, column 206, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...my suitcase did not come out.Instantly, i complained at the office and emailed th...
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Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ailed the details. The bag is new and medium sized with its brand name JJ writ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...brand name JJ written on the top center.The handle itself has a golden case and it ...
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Suggestion: There
...s a golden case and it is number locked.There is only few accessories,a brand new pac...
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Suggestion: , a
...ber locked.There is only few accessories,a brand new packed mobile phone and some ...
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Suggestion: Actually
... packed mobile phone and some documents.Actually the documents are very important,relate...
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Suggestion: , related
...ctually the documents are very important,related to my Job.I got a good support from you...
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Suggestion: I
...ts are very important,related to my Job.I got a good support from your informatio...
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Suggestion: Actually
... no further contact from your officials.Actually i am disappointment because i do not ge...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...er contact from your officials.Actually i am disappointment because i do not get ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ls.Actually i am disappointment because i do not get any details regarding this. ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , i
...ot get any details regarding this. So,i need to know the current status of my c...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...t get any details regarding this. So,i need to know the current status of my c...
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Suggestion: Here
... complaint and wish to hear the updates.Here i mentioned my contact details to keep ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...laint and wish to hear the updates.Here i mentioned my contact details to keep in...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Please
...y contact details to keep in touch with.Please make the necessary as soon as possible....
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Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
... as soon as possible. I look forward to hear from you. Akshaya 0011-36544
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Line 9, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ok forward to hear from you. Akshaya 0011-36544
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00621118012 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37988658796 2.54303337028 133% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.708074534161 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6804123711 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 16.3608247423 244% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 159.626564205 44.8134815571 356% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 201.5 76.5299724578 263% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.25 16.8248392259 239% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.5 4.34317383033 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 2.54639175258 785% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130277158426 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620798472967 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545159217559 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775998091209 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501062479237 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 8.37731958763 266% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 70.7449484536 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 7.45979381443 237% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.67 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 8.62886597938 330% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 8.54432989691 211% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 8.15463917526 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.