Today we know that car is more important for traveling. Everyone has different point of view about the use of the car in coming twenty years. Some people believe that in twenty years there will be fewer car in use than there are today and some people believe that more car will be use in coming twenty year and I also agree that there use of car is increased in coming twenty year. I feel this for two reasons which i will explore in my essay.
First of all, we all know today the cities are more developed and growing. Only car is easy access to travel at any place if we have 3-4 members in our family because we know that traveling in airplanes are more costly. For example, In my family we have 4 members and we went to Canada from Seattle and flights tickets are very costly so we went to Canada by car it will be in our budget. By the car we also saw the scenery from Seattle to Canada.
Secondly, transportation cost is increasing day by day and we travel daily to more places and we faces many problems like transportation cost, booking of rental car etc. For instance, in our daily life we travel many distances for groceries, restaurants and for other work and for this we have to book rental car which is very costly so if have car then we can easily travel by car which can reduce the cost.
Furthermore, we want to travel at any place and if we have car than we can travel easily and if we do not have than we have to think about more for travelling.
To sum up of all this, there will be more car in coming twenty year that reduce the cost and provide easy access to go at any place. It also gives us a very relax life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: face; fax
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...ve to think about more for travelling. To sum up of all this, there will be mor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, i feel, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17610062893 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17111436583 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.421383647799 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2438564752 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.153846154 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 5.45110844103 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161844973276 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740165964093 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768572953755 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113114824272 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0986588648807 0.0645574589148 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.26 10.9000537634 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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