Something in an airport delayed you and you have missed your flight.
Write a letter to the airport's customer service department. In your letter include:
• what delayed you
• how missing this flight affected you
• what you would like the airport to do about this issue
To whomsoever it may concern.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing this letter to you, in order to bring to your attention, a frustrating experience I had, at the San Fransisco Airport.
Last week, I was scheduled to board the American Airlines flight to Austin at 9am. As per the norms, I arrived at the security gates an hour before the boarding time. However, there was only a single counter open at the security check, due to which, I had to wait for more than one hour. Hence, I missed my flight, which led me to miss my best friend's graduation.
Although the airport is well-equipped with all facilities, the lack of sufficient security check-points is causing major inconvenience to passengers. Therefore, it is my humble request to please ensure availability of more points at peak hours and also, would appreciate, if the airport customer service would provide me compensation for my missed flight.
Thanking You in advance.
Yours sincerely,
Raj
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2018-08-11 | Nitin Bhosale | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 155, Rule ID: STATE_OF_THE_ART[1]
Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
...18. Although, San Francisco airport has state of the art technology, there was only 1 security c...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ted to miss his graduation function. I would like to request the airport custo...
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Line 6, column 137, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...en for the terminals during peak hours. Also I could like the airport customer servi...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...used. I am hoping to hear back soon. Yours Sincerely, ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours Sincerely, - Raj
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76216216216 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61127100663 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589189189189 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5382403705 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0909090909 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159937379014 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621953204293 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390114762747 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761514220575 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531891494144 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.