The chart shows the sports played in Australia in 2003.all figures in percentage

Grammar and spelling errors:
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... given bar chart gives information about the nine different sport played by boys ...
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...d by boys and girls during the year 2003 in Australia. The given data is percentu...
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...t is a clear and coherent representation It can be seen that net ball was played...
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...ntation It can be seen that net ball was played more by the girls as compared...
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...e other hand women same played athletics ,tennis and basket ball park which were 6...
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...rk which were 6%,7% and 6.5 respectively Furthermore, 24% of boys and 5%of girls ...
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...24% of boys and 5%of girls played soccer .During the year 2003 in Australia. In ad...
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...% of boys and 5%of girls played soccer .During the year 2003 in Australia. In addition...
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... .During the year 2003 in Australia. In addition boys have more than Played in other spo...
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...Played in both side cricket and material . Overall ,it is evident that maximum ...
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...h side cricket and material . Overall ,it is evident that maximum percentage bo...
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...s played soccer and netball respectively
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, apart from, in addition, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 672.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 139.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8345323741 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54586499474 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604316546763 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 186.3 283.868780488 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.07634156 43.030603864 307% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 134.4 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6 5.23603664747 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228303754905 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128842506715 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856209261019 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149954887497 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552480083758 0.0819641961636 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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