Music is food to our soul, it is a form of art whose medium of propagation is sound in different time intervals, whereas, today there are several types of music and the question arise why do music is needed. And if traditional music of a nation or international one is more essential.
Admittedly, music has been part of human culture form ancient times, when at any festival or communal programme it was heard. This trend is still continued for instance, in India where in sikhism music is played from birth till death. Moreover, it act as reliver of tension and worries as people like to listen to music to rejuvenate themselves, in this busy life style it helps to recreate them and do to the task more effectively. Music is needed to express happiness as it is best way to convey our message. Today, number of musicians perform live on stage and show their feelings to masses. Hence, it is most imperative part of life and cannot be changed.
However, nowadays there are numerous types of music, in which international music is becoming more prominent. But, still individual like to enjoy orthodox music because it is played in their local language and they can understand it better. They feel connected to their roots and feel mesmerized. People understand their culture more by music, that promote harmony and friendly relations. Furthermore, cultural music is more sober while, international music is violent and uses abusive language. It can have detrimental effects on pupils. To illustrate, global music shows acts of vandalism and have negative approach towards life. Thus, traditional music plays vital role in life.
In conclusion, music is a language to express views and cultural music is more important than international one, due to its multifarious benefits. At end, cultural music will remain most favoured type of music.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02605863192 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74778435039 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589576547231 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3548423919 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7222222222 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0555555556 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.453789806552 0.244688304435 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153108879288 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109488987858 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314409141305 0.151304729494 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662107581065 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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