It is considered by few people that doing graduation studies in university is essential for better life in future while others who think that it is not mandatory to having university education but having a good experience and a skills is essential. In my opinion, it is good to have university background but also having a good experience and technical skills are necessary.
With having university background makes many people things easier for people to having a good job. In other words, having tertiary education puts more efforts to getting a better jobs ahead of others who do not have any relevant institution degrees. For example, nobody can imagine becoming a engineer without any graduate studies and poor at technical skills. So, it is important to have professional studies to gain theoretical knowledge.
On the other hand, most people say that having more work experience and technical skills and also other relevant skills, can also put their future to be more successful. To give clear example, a great business name Mr. Ambani who is currently earning in billion dollars without having any kind of education but he have great skills in business as well as he also have experience of many years. Thus, it is prove that to become a successful person in life we do not need any kind of education but have experience and skills are necessary.
Overall, one cannot say that acquiring a good job requires a base of graduate studies, but having technical skills and work experience are essential.
- Nowadays more tasks at home and work are being performed by robots. why do you think it is happening. Is it negative or positive development? 61
- Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time . This can benefit teenagers and the community as well.Do you agree or disagree??? 56
- Number of plants and animals are declining.Explain this problem and suggest some solutions. 78
- Most countries develop their economies to improve living standards. Some people afraid that it will cause degradation of important social values. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
- The graph shows the number of boys and girls playing sport in an English town in 2012. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: IT_IS_JJ_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'?
Suggestion: have
...s who think that it is not mandatory to having university education but having a good ...
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Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a skill' or simply 'skills'?
Suggestion: a skill; skills
...cation but having a good experience and a skills is essential. In my opinion, it is good...
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Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...or example, nobody can imagine becoming a engineer without any graduate studies a...
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Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
... Mr. Ambani who is currently earning in billion dollars without having any kind of educ...
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Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...out having any kind of education but he have great skills in business as well as he ...
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Line 5, column 364, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...t skills in business as well as he also have experience of many years. Thus, it is p...
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Line 5, column 407, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'proved', 'proven'.
Suggestion: proved; proven
...e experience of many years. Thus, it is prove that to become a successful person in l...
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Line 7, column 151, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ills and work experience are essential.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, kind of, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99209486166 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71667759222 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478260869565 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.3094424537 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.3 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371603873335 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170870874081 0.084324248473 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811393305759 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239803561649 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828663163121 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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