The provided bar graph illustrates the different kinds of sports played by both gender(boy and girl) in the town in England in the year .
In general, it can be clearly seen that, the football was played most by boys, where as swimming done by majority of girls. But, hockey was played least among all other sports by both gender.
As can be seen, total of four sports played most by boys among girls. 60 boys played football while only around 20 girls showed interest in this game. Apart from this, Tennis was played by 50 boys where as only 35 girls played tennis. Similarly, in cycling nearly 40 boys participated and in opposite its nearly half of the boys. Among all other sports both gender showed least interest in hockey which is approximately 15 and 10 respectively.
On the other hand, the sports in which girls had taken parts more as compared to opposite gender were swimming and badminton. The remaining two sports in which both showed a difference of about 10 between genders. As 50 girls preferred in swimming as compared to only 40 girls in badminton.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... girl in the town in England in the year . In general, it can be clearly seen...
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Line 4, column 80, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
..., the football was played most by boys, where as swimming done by majority of girls. But...
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Line 6, column 198, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...from this, Tennis was played by 50 boys where as only 35 girls played tennis. Similarly,...
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Line 6, column 366, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'showed the least'.
Suggestion: showed the least
...oys. Among all other sports both gender showed least interest in hockey which is approximate...
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Line 8, column 67, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...rts in which girls had taken parts more as compared to opposite gender were swimmi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, while, apart from, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72340425532 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41504109787 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526595744681 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.078020741 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.7272727273 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306824820359 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123685925183 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646380325968 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190212361488 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742121423053 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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