Respected Sir,
I am writing this letter to intimate you about the problematic situations we are facing in the Brook Street with respect to public transportation since last week. The people who used to travel from Delhi to Noida are strictly effected from this because of Delhi Metro Rail services, which is not working at all.
Erstwhile, the kids are not reaching their school on their appropriate time and same with officers as well. Currently, only a couple of buses are running which is surely not a good alternative for Metro Rail. The differences in the speed and timings in public transport methods make the people dull. For instance, yesterday I had an interview but due to these issues, I have missed the so-called imperative interview for IAS position. Sorry to say, but I can see many other faces facing the same problems.
I would urge you to take some rapid actions like if you can allow more buses to run on the way from Delhi to Noida, can we have school cab for the kids at least for some time until metro rail starts again? I wish you will adhere and can understand the criticality or this valid situation.
We are looking for some positive changes at the earliest.
Sincerely
Alex
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Respected Sir, I am writing this letter to intimate you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well, while, at least, for instance, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74056603774 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48489115481 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627358490566 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.8917497355 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11821428436 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424826549319 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051667973306 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755318675086 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176320357808 0.0580467560999 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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