Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. However, others believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion ?
A criminal rate has been increasing nowadays, which will be the disaster to our world. There has always been considerable discussion about how to tackle the problem of crime. We have many ways to solve this problem from the simplest one to the cruelest one. In my opinion, all the solution are of the same importance to control illegalities.
On the one hand, the longer prison terms for the criminals is important to reduce crime. In the past few years, the number of crime has been exploding because of the short prison term. The offender doesn’t care about being committed to prison. They think being in there for few years is just a short vacation out of a noisy city while living in a luxury hotel, serving 2-3 course meal a day. So the long-term of prison will be the cruelest way to the suspect but will be the best way to stop them from breaking the law. For instance, Filipinos are get used to their law which is giving the longer prison terms for the criminal if they break the law. The rate of criminal in their country has been decreasing rapidly in these years because of the longer prison term.
On the other hand, being arrested and committed in a prison for a long-term also is not a good ideal for the government. In the research of scientist in Mexico, there’s a state that their country doesn’t have enough prison for committing the offender. So there is another way to solve this problem, that is investing money in running propaganda campaigns in which means citizens aware of the importance of rehabilitation opportunities for ex-prisoners after serving jail sentences. Therefore, even the offender has been released, they still have a job and won’t come back to the life of crime. They also are welcomed and encouraged in creating a positive lifestyle by the civilian.
In conclusion, giving the longer prison term still is playing a part in preventing illegal actions. But we still have many improvement ways to solve this problem. To me, reforming the offenders, giving them a job and helping them aware of their revising illegal actions still is the best solution to this complication
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also, but, if, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80434782609 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68379228347 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478260869565 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1306254648 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0526315789 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3684210526 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52631578947 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203699919568 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638906008389 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472889691363 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119083703827 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381355751692 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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