The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
» Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates, the changes in wheat exports in Australia, Canada and European countries between 1985 and 1990. Units are measured in million tonnes.
Overall, the most significant growth in wheat exports was in European countries. While, the Australian exports shows a down ward trend among other countries.
The most significant wheat exporters was Canada at the beginning period with approximately 19 million tonnes. Then the export ratio fell down to about 17 million tonnes and dramatically went up to 25 million tonnes in 1988. In the middle of 1989 Canadian wheat export ratio was lower than European community and reached to below 15 million tonnes. However, after one year they surged in to the almost near in beginning period rate.
In the early 1985, wheat export ratio of European community and Australia was nearly 17 and 15 million tonnes respectively. By the middle of 1985 the account of Australian wheat exports was exceeding European community and reached more than 15 million tonnes by 1986. Then there was a gradual decrease in exporting and continued to just over 10 million at the end of the period. Moreover, European community surpass Australian market by the middle of 1987 and rapid progress to above 20 million tonnes in 1990.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...en 1985 and 1990. Units are measured in million tonnes. Overall, the most significa...
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...heat exports was in European countries. While, the Australian exports shows a down wa...
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Suggestion:
...on tonnes in 1988. In the middle of 1989 Canadian wheat export ratio was lower th...
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... and reached more than 15 million tonnes by 1986. Then there was a gradual decrea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12980769231 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61092220411 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495192307692 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6951166964 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9166666667 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112194969661 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516373300846 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363277258127 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802832999253 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00927029971234 0.0819641961636 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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