Claim: Imagination is a more valuable asset than experience.
Reason: People who lack experience are free to imagine what is possible without the constraints of established habits and attitudes. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
With the world's demand clamoring for new innovative inventions, many people claim that it has become more important for people to think creatively rather than gain more experience. The pervasive opinion seems to be that people with less experience can suggest more creative ideas because they are not limited to conventions. Although this argument is intriguing and seems to be concrete, experience should be valued over imagination.
Admittedly, imagination has indeed led to striking discoveries and inventions in various fields. The invention of the telephone, the computer, the plane, the int...
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
comments:
the arguments are fine, but not outstanding. see a sample essay which has same ideas:
https://www.testbig.com/gmatgre-issue-task-essays/claim-imagination-mor…
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 26 15
No. of Words: 585 350
No. of Characters: 2945 1500
No. of Different Words: 279 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.918 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.034 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.752 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 201 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 153 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 114 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 87 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.581 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.269 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.288 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.468 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.127 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovative'.
Suggestion: innovative
With the worlds demand clamoring for new innovative inventions, many people claim that it h...
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Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hadn't
...umably could have occurred because they hadnt had the experience or known the extent ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 674, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ge norm of society, because they simply dont know the limits that exist in reality. ...
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Line 5, column 350, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...ght Brothers. This historical discovery wasnt made because one day they had the audac...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 495, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...hey first had the knowledge that humans cant fly on their own; based on this fact, t...
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Line 5, column 987, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...would be successful. Simple imagination wouldnt have lead them to their desired result....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 58.6224719101 142% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 12.9106741573 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3010.0 2235.4752809 135% => OK
No of words: 581.0 442.535393258 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18072289157 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90957651803 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81786976867 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 215.323595506 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481927710843 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 944.1 704.065955056 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3862918158 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.769230769 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3461538462 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.34615384615 5.21951772744 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205995624866 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623565401709 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621359656637 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14769424237 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790133991842 0.0667264976115 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 100.480337079 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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