In this modern world, sports is the indispensable part of any individual person. Without sports, we did not expect no longer life , as a human being. I agree with this statement that popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.
First and foremost, there are ample number of sports plays tremendous role in every nation policy. When our team wins the world cup, while as a home nation cheered, we feel great proud of winner nation. Although, it increases strength, stamina and skills. Furthermore, maximum numbers of teenagers motivated from these world winner players. Apart from that, when we come to see the borders of both sides, sometimes they also close to friendly relationship and brotherhood. In addition to that, government also put some steps to control stress of international plans and thesis.
In the summary, some huge events plays supreme role in every nation.
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disvantages? 56
- Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 56
- New technologies have changed the way children spend their time. Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? 56
- Competition increases in every person's life .To what extend do you agree or disagree ? 22
- New technologies have changed the way children spend their time. Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...sports, we did not expect no longer life , as a human being. I agree with this sta...
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Line 1, column 350, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a safe way" with adverb for "safe"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nsions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. First and foremost, there are ample n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, while, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 163.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23312883436 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74590035664 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.717791411043 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.320780233 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319524327269 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108306231652 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.228031567741 0.0667982634062 341% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215628824891 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.238616484067 0.056905535591 419% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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