Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The public opinion is gaining popularity worldwide with the rise of social media and democracy around. According to some people there must be fixed punishments for every crime, whereas others believe that crime scene and the contributing factors must determine the intensity of punishment for any given crime.
Some people strongly believe in the idea of fixed punishments, for each type of crime despite the consequences for any crime. Since every act with hazardous impact or potential hazard is labelled as a crime, the guilty must be punished in a fixed way. For example, if a person rushing to hospital, to meet a dear one in very critical state, breaks a traffic signal which results in a major accident on the other hand does not warrant a less intensity punishment. The idea is to minimize the crime rate, as public fears the intensity of punishment in return.
Whereas some people believe that punishment must be altered after evaluating the leading factors for any crime. The guilty must benefit the contributing factors that compelled him, for the act. For example, if a man who's deeply under burden of the bank loans, robs a bank or does any other robbery, so he could buy medicines for his terminally sick parent or child must be dealt with sympathy. The reason behind this school of thought remains superiority of individual, his debts, his personal financial condition, which was so poor that he was compelled to commit a crime, in order to meet basic needs for his family.
This essay gives the opinion of regarding fixed punishments and leverages to be considered, after evaluation of all factors that led to any crime. In my opinion, punishments must be customized depending upon the act, consequences of the act and will of the victim. Considering a man who's found guilty of sexually abusing children, must be punished to such great intensity, that everyone else feels discouraged to commit the same crime in ages to come. The customized punishments hold some grey area which people can manipulate for their own ease, but on the contrary public would be able to intensify the punishments through jury for any social crimes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, whereas, for example, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96121883657 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66407692891 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518005540166 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.1863411081 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.928571429 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7857142857 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331254351758 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135254287173 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102225313894 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239649058545 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329493828831 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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