Some scientist say that the world will be destroyed by human activities very soon . to what extent do you agree or disagree
Experts in field of environmental science believe that due to man’s actions and the importance given to industrialization, the world or the earth as we know today will cease to exist. The environment we live in is constantly worsening because of the man-made factors owing to which it might hamper day to day existence, unless action is readily taken.
Cities these days are experiencing higher temperatures than normally expected during summers. This can be attributed to the rising temperatures in the atmosphere, which is directly related to excessive and reckless industrialization. For instance, the Capital city of India, New Delhi, experiences autumn season in the month of October, but this phenomenon has changed in the last 15 years, autumn doesn’t set in until mid-November and winters aren’t as harsh as they used to be. Unless, stringent actions are taken and regulations are put in place to counteract this condition, the place would become completely unlivable and barren.
Despite the alarming changes in the temperatures and living conditions across the globe, the regular citizen seems to be unperturbed /undisturbed. This is either the lack of awareness or just carelessness. Industries and factories have completely taken over our land and livelihood in order to add to their profits while disturbing the natural environment. Governments should bring into place stricter laws in a bid to make sure that the businesses don’t pollute the local ecological balance. If left to their own devices, pollution would destroy the places, thereby killing all forms of life.
In conclusion, it is important to understand that this is only planet conducive to human existence and we would be better off if we tried to reverse or at least reduce the damage done. If not, as the scientists predicted, we would join the dinosaurs very soon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 55, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... it is important to understand that this is only planet conducive to human existe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, at least, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30303030303 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10991202277 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656565656566 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6152677109 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.153846154 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0845198080143 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0289736993426 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383043604725 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.050891407894 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342477125713 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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