One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is the colossal upsurge in the influence on the society by the mass media including TV, radio and newspaper. There is a widespread concern that some people believe they have the negative affect but proponents are against it. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious considerations.
There are myriad of arguments in favour of my stance but the most preponderant one lies in the fact that the positive vibes broadcasted by TV make us aware of the world in one go. In fact, not only do mass media helps in innovations but also bends the society towards development. We can find overwhelming evidence in support of the fact that invention in rural areas generates idea watching TV programme. Needless to say, all these merits stand whole society in good stead, as far as the development is considered.
On the other hand, one detrimental aspect of this argument is that mass media can turn the community into the war zone. Many communities declare war with their government after they know others doing same. For the salient example, there is a number of researches by various government bodies that show that in Gaza, civil war influenced by the wrong news broadcasted and printed. People believe the media and make their opinion. Hence, it is apparent why many are against the false news mass media spread.
To recapitulate, in view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of newspaper and TV to shape the world are indeed too great to ignore.
- Effective learning requires time, comfort and peace so it is impossible to combine study and employment. Study and employment distract one from another. To what extent do you think the statements are realistic? Support your opinion with examples? 72
- How widely do you think the problem spreads that people spend too much time on work than their personal life/family/leisure and experience time shortage? What problems will it cause? 80
- "Do you think consumers should avoid over packed products or it is the responsibility of producers to avoid extra packaging of products?" Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience. 77
- In some countries, the number of shootings increase because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 77
- Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress, and how can we reduce it? 85
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, so, in fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89015151515 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71683345074 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579545454545 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.319958947 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3076923077 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208434033777 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709910059652 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650124915858 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121162053821 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486683670234 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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