Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists rather than local people. Why is this? What can be done to encourage local people to visit museums and historical sites?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is the colossal upsurge in visiting museums and historical sites. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in the society. In my opinion, museums has more negative impacts than positives in the local society.
On the one hand, critics may point out that one of the most significant benefits of visiting historical sites is preserving most valuable assets handed to us by our ancestors. For example, local business, unlike in the past, now have generated more income, as they do not have to stay idle, thanks to the tourism industry.
On the other hand, there are several arguments in favour of my stance. One of the most preponderant ones is that local tourist has negative consequences for the society in various ways. Firstly, people are paying more amount for entry fees similar to foreigners which is very expensive such as in national parks. According to "Times Magazine December 2017 edition", the proportion of Indian local visitors to Dudhwa National Park has dropped from 30 percent to 10 percent today. Secondly, a large portion of information can be grabbed within your fingertips because of the internet facilities.
Lastly, in my opinion, the government of India is taking a great initiative in educating its citizens against the negative impact of not visiting local museums. Locals are being encouraged to spend some of their time in museums, to create more importance of it.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite have some benefits, the drawbacks of visiting museums in the society are indeed too dire to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 31.9359605911 157% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05797101449 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71602864385 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597826086957 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3388957789 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.384615385 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.25397266985 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258473312655 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783333034969 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523807099077 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132956093601 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460893994347 0.0609392437508 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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