The following is a memorandum from the business manager of WLSS television station.
"Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with the station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, several local businesses that used to run advertisements during our late-night news program have just cancelled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand the coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs."
Argument seems convincing with valid reason of abatement in revenue generation for news programs. But only on assumption that there is no considerable positive impact of late-night national news broadcasting.
Argument does not provide any clear evidence why national news program are not of important to viewers but it can be assumed that in this technological age, mobile application and wide social netwroks let viewers get to know
about important news before any television media does. Nowadays use of television media is only increased as a medium of business promotion. Because business owners know about the popularities of the programs and their maximum usage time in a day. So that they can target peak time in order to attract maximum range of public.
Argument clearly stated that business owners are disappointed due to broadcasting of national news on television as a part of late-night program, it is clear that audience are also not interested in such programs at late-night. Complaints from users as a part of evidence which is expected according to deduction of buisness owner also supports argument. As per argument, neither viewers nor buisness owners are satisfied by broadcasting of late-night national news program. Thus, argument is valid and need a deliberate attention to mitigate the same.
Further argument stated that if failed to pay attention to issue may leads to financial debacle to news channel company as many buisness owners have canceled advertising contract with the channel. Considerable revenue is plummeted in short range of time. In order to ameliorate growth of company, restoration of local and weather news to its former level is mendatory.
It can be concluded that stated argument provided valid reasons and evidence of bad timing to telecast national news. Further argument show concern about descreaing revenue as a result and request for proposol to restore it to former level.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Argument does not provide any clear evidence why national news program are not of important to viewers but it can be assumed that in this technological age, mobile application and wide social netwroks let viewers get to know about important news before any television media does.
Error: netwroks Suggestion: networks
Sentence: Complaints from users as a part of evidence which is expected according to deduction of buisness owner also supports argument.
Error: buisness Suggestion: business
Sentence: As per argument, neither viewers nor buisness owners are satisfied by broadcasting of late-night national news program.
Error: buisness Suggestion: business
Sentence: In order to ameliorate growth of company, restoration of local and weather news to its former level is mendatory.
Error: mendatory Suggestion: mandatory
Sentence: Further argument show concern about descreaing revenue as a result and request for proposol to restore it to former level.
Error: proposol Suggestion: proposal
Error: descreaing Suggestion: decreasing
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argument 1 -- not OK
argument 2 -- not OK
argument 3 -- OK
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.0 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 307 350
No. of Characters: 1597 1500
No. of Different Words: 162 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.186 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.202 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.826 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 128 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 107 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 78 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.467 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.479 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.343 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.599 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.063 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... social netwroks let viewers get to know about important news before any televisi...
^^^
Line 4, column 249, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... and their maximum usage time in a day. So that they can target peak time in order to a...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, in short, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 55.5748502994 88% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 16.3942115768 134% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 2260.96107784 72% => OK
No of words: 307.0 441.139720559 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.332247557 5.12650576532 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86509814162 2.78398813304 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 204.123752495 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550488599349 0.468620217663 117% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 705.55239521 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9098746674 57.8364921388 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.133333333 119.503703932 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 23.324526521 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.70786347227 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269697291089 0.218282227539 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944518438483 0.0743258471296 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632065252797 0.0701772020484 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139403023856 0.128457276422 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387417742561 0.0628817314937 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.3799401198 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.3550499002 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.5979740519 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.32208582834 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 98.500998004 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.