Tourism has become a major source of income for all countries. Write the advantages and disadvantages of tourism. What should be done to ensure healthily tourism takes place.
It is irrefutable that the tourism industry has experienced a tremendous boom in the later part of the 2oth century, which helped the weaker nations to uplift their failing economies. While the negative aspects also accompany the positive growth of the travel sector. This essay intends to discuss both pros and cons and gives some solutions to make it healthier.
Let us now throw some light on the merits of the growing tourism industry. There is no denying the fact that the mushroom in the numbers of visitors leads to the innumerable prospects in terms of the local entrepreneurs and employees. It results to elevate the local economy of the nations. Thailand is the best example to illustrate this. The entire Thai wealth revolves around the tourism and it raises the socio-economic status through flourishing the hospitality sector. Moreover, in order to the safety of the visitors, governments provide the better law and order, transportation and health facilities which in turn benefits to the indigenous people.
On the other hand, the rising influx of the visitors leads to the increasing incidences of crimes and other antisocial activities such as drugs, human trafficking etcetera. Apart from this, the vacationer's also damaging the natural and cultural resources of the country which they visit. To illustrate, according to the survey conducted, the littering collection is raised by 20 percent than last year.
In an epilogue, it is worth mentioning that by enforcing the stern law and strict legislation, authorities can control the negative impacts of tourism and give a better direction to take it to a new destination.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ions to uplift their failing economies. While the negative aspects also accompany the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, while, apart from, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20377358491 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89698287706 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618867924528 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.897855711 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.076923077 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0972425509378 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279635287421 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423274907542 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0563615165979 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362260093881 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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