The pie chart below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in 2 years.
The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of five TYPES OF ENERGY PRODUCTION in France in 1995 and 2005.
Overall, in both years, the most significant sources of energy were gas and coal, which together accounted for OVER HALF THE PRODUCTION OF ENERGY, while nuclear and other kinds of energy sources GENERATED the least amount of energy in France. In all types of energy production there was only minimal change over the 10-year period.
ENERGY PRODUCED BY COAL comprised of 29.80% in the first year and this showed only a very slight increase of about a mere 1% to 30.9% in 2005. Likewise, in 1995, gas generated 29.63 % which rose marginally to 30.1% 10 years later.
With regards to the remaining METHODS OF PRODUCING ENERGY, there was an approximate 5% GROWTH IN PRODUCTION from both nuclear and other sources to 10.10% and 9.10% respectively. Petrol, on the other hand, was the only source of energy which DECREASED IN PRODUCTION from 29.27% in 1995 to around a fifth (19.55%) in 2005.
- The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison 67
- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults.Discuss both views and give your own opinion 67
- When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- In education and employment some people work harder than others Why do some people work harder Is it always a good thing to work hard 72
- Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the table below. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
... the most significant sources of energy were gas and coal, which together accounted ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, likewise, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88823529412 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49258673106 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576470588235 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2385377924 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.714285714 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218148442866 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106057146343 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088569683415 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148638204283 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940812301139 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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