The figures below show the changing trends in leisure in Europe for certain industries.
There are two charts that illustrate trends of different leisure in Europe. Overall, the two charts shown fluctuated trend during the mentioned period.
The first chart is the line chart for the entertainment industry in two sections; Internet Sales and Album Sales. As can see, from 2013 until 2018 there is a gradual increase in the number of album sales with about 1000 million dollars in 2018, while from 2018 to 2022 there will be a moderate increase and will continue to 2024 by 8000 million dollars. The other section that mentions in line chart is Album Sales. From 2013 to 2016 there was a moderate increase to 2500 million dollars. After 2016, there was a sharp decrease in figures for sales for this section and will continue 2024 with just over 0 million dollars.
Turning to the bar chart shows the forecast for cinema-goers. There are two estimates part of this chart. The first estimate from 2013 t0 2018 shows an increasing trend from about 850 million to 1200 million in 2018. By contrast, the second estimate for cinema attendances same as the estimate 1 was about 800 million, and in other years except 2015 with 1200 million, shows a decreasing trend with about 300 million in 2018.
- Some people believe that robots will play an important role in future societies while other argue that robots might have negative effects on society Discuss both views and give your opinion 87
- The bar chart shows a survey of a group of young professional aged 20 30 years who were asked to state which factors motivated them to succeed 91
- The diagram below shows the average growth in the domestic product in wealthy countries; counties that have adopted a global approach to business and countries that have not. 78
- More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing, and medicine. Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people rich countries are stealing from poo 73
- The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... trend with about 300 million in 2018.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81339712919 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33299590605 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497607655502 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.2507158491 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4545454545 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12143114519 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580603862523 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515929052852 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940675790805 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288161403138 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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