Nowadays, the bickering has common trend amongst youngsters and married people. This has led polygamy and high divorce rates. Justify the response with your positive or negative views.
The trend of the bickering in the society is augmenting day by day and it is on its alarming phase which leads to the polygamy and the high divorce rates. Where a significant number of people think that it is not good for the society, some support this sorts of notion. I strongly condemn this trend and totally disagree with it and will elucidate further using required arguments and exmaples.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument, but the most preponderant one is less amount of patience in the youngsters. Due to the high salaries, bigger friend-circle and luxuaries lifestyle, whether man or women, everyone want that each and every thing should work according to their wish. Consequently, if either ones ego hurts, it converted to personal arguments and due to lack of patience, these kind of arguments converted to the immensly huge decisions like divorce and polygamy.
Another pivotal aspect of bickering is lack of time and discussion between the patners. Currently, everyone is busy with their life due to various factors like social, personal or official. However, it has been seen that the the patners do not want to discuss the things which affect them in any manner. Moreover, less interaction between each other affect them tremendously. Substentially, it is affecting the life of their children and other dependents as well who face yelling, fighting between their parents on daily basis.
In conclusion, on the basis of above-mentioned points, one can conclude that the bickering is a curse to the society which not only affect the life of the youngsters but their dependents as well. In case of conflicts, both should sit back and discuss about the root-cause of the problems and try to solve it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
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Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...fficial. However, it has been seen that the the patners do not want to discuss the thin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01712328767 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7528516919 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571917808219 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4497691195 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.692307692 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118472168468 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399654097523 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050692526326 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743774205889 0.151781067708 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067826239464 0.0609392437508 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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