Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter
suggest someone you think should receive the award
describe what the person does to help the community
suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Sir,
I came to know that you are hosting an award show for the people who have helped the community. For this noble cause, I want to recommend the name of one of great personality named Mr. John. In order to know to get familiar with him and with his work, I want to tell you that he is a police officer. Currently, he is working near to municipal corporation police station.
He is very polite and helpful. He not only helped the people like me, but he also spend his free time with children playing in the playground, where he teach them ethics and self defence tips. He is always ready to help regardless the age group. I also want to share my personal experience where he helped me generously. While, I was struggling to get the police clearance for my passport application in police station where he was working that day, he came forward and helped me to understand the process. I am wondering, if he won't be there at that time, so it can be a cumbersome situation for me to know all the procedure and documentations.
Moreover, after observing his behavior for all for few days, I got the change to know him more. So, I invited him to my home where he shared his other experience where he helped others.
I am requesting you to please consider him for this award as in my opinion he is a deserving guy for this award.
Best Regards
Anand Deep Singh
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-09-11 | ananddeepsingh | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
... helped the people like me, but he also spend his free time with children playing in ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'teaches'.
Suggestion: teaches
...ren playing in the playground, where he teach them ethics and self defence tips. He i...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...each them ethics and self defence tips. He is always ready to help regardless the ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 51.0 5.60731707317 910% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 254.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42519685039 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54941856098 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 106.607317073 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562992125984 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 1.53170731707 914% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3554365397 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2857142857 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124191746545 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522909665782 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652650645105 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937878047514 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390805304767 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.2329268293 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.