05.11.2017You ordered an item on a company website, which should have been delivered the next day, but it never turned up. Write a letter to the manager and say– what was the item– why it was important that you get it immediately– what you suggest t

Dear Sir,

My name is Prikshit Saini. I have recently ordered a gaming console from you well-known website amazon.com. It has been almost 3 days and I do not have any information about my order.

On 20th October, I have placed an order of the latest Play Station 4 Pro from your e-commerce site. I am one of your prime customers, so as per the rule it should be delivered by the next day from the order date. However, untill now I have no clue about the status of my order.

I need this item as soon as possible because I am organizing a gaming tournament in my town next week. The reason I need it immediately because I am short of one gaming console. Furthermore, I need some time to set up and test it before the competition.

I would suggest you look into this matter closely. My order number is NKANAKDN23. Please make it possible to deliver it by tomorrow as I need it urgently. Otherwise, I need to cancel my order.

Hoping for a prompt action from your side!

Yours Faithfully,
Rahul Sharma

Votes
Average: 7 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t have any information about my order. On 20th October, I have placed an order ...
^^^
Line 14, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...side! Yours Faithfully, Rahul Sharma
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, look, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48387096774 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62295623493 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629032258065 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8019035425 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.5714285714 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2857142857 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162722137872 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545935519782 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365093966965 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818840268664 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471082429053 0.0580467560999 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.