The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.

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The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.

The bar chart compares the percentage of female unemployment in four areas of the United Kingdom from 2013 to 2014. From the general perspective, the clear data could be observed, including a small decline in England, Wales as well as Northern Ireland, a slight growth in Scotland over the period.

In 2013, England was the highest proportion of women unemployment at 6.8%, followed by Scotland, Northern Ireland and Wales. On the other hand, Wales was the only region that had the lowest female unemployment rate at 5.4%. After one year, there was a change of ranking among regions, Scotland was at the top of female unemployment rate at 6.7%, while Northern Ireland was at the bottom at 4.6% in 2014.

From 2013 to 2014, all countries witnessed a decrease in the percentage of female unemployment excepted in Scotland where experienced a steady rise of 0.6%. Especially in Northern Ireland, this figure significantly diminished by 1% and the average of the proportion of the other areas was roundly 0.4%.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, well, while, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02976190476 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79981550048 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4756904335 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.714285714 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230632321307 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125044066878 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107404120007 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15952099909 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0131417179438 0.0819641961636 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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