This is supposed to be an enlightened age, and being intellectual falls into two categorizes which are named schools and parents. Albeit, myriad of people are sagacious, but it is essential that urgent measure be taken to admonish them of a good way to be intellectual and it needs to be controlled.
On the one hand, never has the world faced way too many issues when some children could not be sociable that today, it has gain wild. Parents have proved repeatedly that, they can bring social development for their children and the more they endeavor, the more prosperous they are in this way, and precisely, success will have been being made for their children. Apart from it, not only can children tower their communications, but they can be top-flight in their lives, and had some children been noticed more, their progress would have been made. Take it for granted that, children learning from parents, frequently succeed brilliantly in this case and differences between these children are very marked indeed.
On the other hand, we must have known that school is not a miniature society and seen going to school, were myriad of students, and they can learn every thing you care to name. Clearly, if some parents were informed of the precious benefit of school, they would never marginalize it. Partly, being awestricken from society, has experienced down ward trends for children, and positively, it worth be intellectual at school and it is beneficial as it used to be. It won't yield result in these words, other children, intellectual as they were, they did not have good communication with society.
In conclusion, in this sophisticated age, both views can help children to enhance their perception, but, timid measures should be taken for children to have a better-off in stead of be committed to using pains in society, and remove bleak situation.
- Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 78
- Many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places.What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations? 89
- Once children start school, the teachers have more influence on their intellectual and social development than parents.To what extend do you agree or disagree? 78
- Task 1 writing - Women employed in four countries 73
- Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (high acid levels are measured by low pH values).Describe the information below and discuss the implications for dental health. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 171, Rule ID: IN_STEAD_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'instead of'?
Suggestion: instead of
...taken for children to have a better-off in stead of be committed to using pains in society,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, apart from, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98717948718 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70634314678 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570512820513 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.1518052384 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.454545455 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3636363636 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197186219654 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824645183804 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481323708895 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115648542898 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506011549121 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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