Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that the traditional press will still offer the collection of information despite the appearance of social media. While I agree with the viewpoint of the prominence of the newspaper, I do believe that news on the Internet is also of great importance.
On the one hand, there are many reasons why newspapers are the trailblazing source of news. Firstly, the newspaper offers remote people if they can not access the Internet, or even there are many people prefer reading traditional papers to spending time on the Internet such as elderly people do not get accustomed to using technology. Secondly, newspapers are always factual because to accomplish a newspaper, there have to be journalists, editors who are trained tactfully. Therefore, in any period newspaper will continue to be a vital source of information.
However, these aforementioned reasons can be seen as the opposite angle. The main reason is that the Internet allows people to keep abreast of information immediately whenever wanting by using mobile technology. Another key benefit of online news is that it creates the discussed forums and sharing their own viewpoints. For example, there has been an explosion in the use of platforms like Twitter and YouTube where anyone can share their news and views.
In conclusion, each way of transporting news have both positive and detrimental effect on people in the Internet age.
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- Some people say that education system is the only critical factor to development of a country To what extent do you agree or disagree 87
- The table below shows the percentages of people joining in seven different sports in a European country from 1999 to 2009. 89
- It is better to eat food which is produced locally by small farmers rather than food produced by factory farming and transported long distances To what extent do you agree or disagree 66
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who are able to read and write in the different regions of the world and the world average in 2004. 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2096069869 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90635548978 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620087336245 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1463011831 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.454545455 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257392124778 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088158870004 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585763843675 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145771983416 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520348952554 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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