Manned space flight is costly and dangerous. Moreover, the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men and women into space. Therefore, we should invest our resources in unmanned space flight
The above argument is a statement in letter to the editor of a national aeronautics magazine. In the letter, the author emphasize that manned space flights are costly and precarious. The author further put forward the recent success stories of the unmanned space probes and satellites that have managed to glean useful information and emphasize that the costs and risks that is associated witht sending of men and women into space is eliminated. Finally, the author of the letter conclude and suggest that resources should be invested into unmanned space flights. The argument shown above , though seems to be true and correct especially with the technological advancements of the modern aeronautics industry, does not provide compelling reasons for its suggestions. Moreover, the argument is underined from several loopholes that the author does not give explanations for.
First of all, the author states that a manned space flight is costly and dangerous. The author seems to have some janudice against the sending of men and women to space. While it is a general fact that space missions are equally costly and dangerous and not all governments of this world have the ability or infrastructure to send radical men and women, the author does not provide any reason as to why manned space flight should be discontinued. Witht he development of technology, many governments, both the developed and the developing, are persistently looking methods that could make manned space missions cheaper and safer. With the exhaustive training and procedures followed by the leading space research organizers such as NASA and the Russian Space Agency, astronauts are trained to perform the mission safely and responsibly. The author does not provide any compelling reason why this world should not allow its people to continue manned space flights, nor does he give any evidence as to why these missions are costly and dangerous.
Secondly, the author states the recent success of space probes and satellites to glean and collect information as a reson to discontinue manned space travel. While the author is correct that space probles and satellites are successful in their purpose of collecting vaible data, he is wrong to consider the manned pace missions to be similar to that to sace probes and satellites. It is a known fact that manned space missions are for complex purposes that invlove more than just collecting data. While, collecting data is important, the purpose of sending radical peole is to conduct extensive reseach that could provide information such as life on other planets the habitual nature of other planets. Sending unmanned space flights for such missions cannot glean the necessary information to do so.Moreover, the author states that these satellites and space probes are cost effective and are less dangerous.In this situation, the author does not shed details or evidences as to why such missions are cheap and safe coared to manned space flight.The author should provide compelling resons for the same in order to validate the argument.
To conclude, the arguments presents the author in such a way that he treats manned space flight with jundice. Even though some arguments are presented the author do not present any solid evidence in order to prove his take on the subject.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: The author further put forward the recent success stories of the unmanned space probes and satellites that have managed to glean useful information and emphasize that the costs and risks that is associated witht sending of men and women into space is eliminated.
Error: witht Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Moreover, the argument is underined from several loopholes that the author does not give explanations for.
Error: underined Suggestion: undermined
Sentence: The author seems to have some janudice against the sending of men and women to space.
Error: janudice Suggestion: jaundice
Sentence: Secondly, the author states the recent success of space probes and satellites to glean and collect information as a reson to discontinue manned space travel.
Error: reson Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: While the author is correct that space probles and satellites are successful in their purpose of collecting vaible data, he is wrong to consider the manned pace missions to be similar to that to sace probes and satellites.
Error: vaible Suggestion: viable
Error: probles Suggestion: problem
Error: sace Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: It is a known fact that manned space missions are for complex purposes that invlove more than just collecting data.
Error: invlove Suggestion: involve
Sentence: While, collecting data is important, the purpose of sending radical peole is to conduct extensive reseach that could provide information such as life on other planets the habitual nature of other planets.
Error: reseach Suggestion: research
Error: peole Suggestion: people
Sentence: Sending unmanned space flights for such missions cannot glean the necessary information to do so.Moreover, the author states that these satellites and space probes are cost effective and are less dangerous.In this situation, the author does not shed details or evidences as to why such missions are cheap and safe coared to manned space flight.The author should provide compelling resons for the same in order to validate the argument.
Error: resons Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: coared Suggestion: cared
Sentence: To conclude, the arguments presents the author in such a way that he treats manned space flight with jundice.
Error: jundice Suggestion: justice
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 10 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 537 350
No. of Characters: 2720 1500
No. of Different Words: 219 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.814 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.065 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.576 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 215 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 149 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 95 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 60 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.263 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.197 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.526 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.383 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.542 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.168 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 589, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... space flights. The argument shown above , though seems to be true and correct esp...
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Line 5, column 800, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...lean the necessary information to do so.Moreover, the author states that these satellite...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 909, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...e cost effective and are less dangerous.In this situation, the author does not she...
^^
Line 5, column 1047, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... and safe coared to manned space flight.The author should provide compelling reson...
^^^
Line 5, column 1050, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d safe coared to manned space flight.The author should provide compelling resons ...
^^
Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...reats manned space flight with jundice. Even though some arguments are presented the author...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, as to, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.6327345309 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 11.1786427146 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 13.6137724551 118% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 28.8173652695 108% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 55.5748502994 99% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2775.0 2260.96107784 123% => OK
No of words: 534.0 441.139720559 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19662921348 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80712388197 4.56307096286 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68751898961 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 204.123752495 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.430711610487 0.468620217663 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 873.0 705.55239521 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 16.0 8.76447105788 183% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.8473053892 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.1634727963 57.8364921388 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.052631579 119.503703932 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1052631579 23.324526521 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89473684211 5.70786347227 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363771740253 0.218282227539 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136824242684 0.0743258471296 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104637523478 0.0701772020484 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230196195066 0.128457276422 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898993730013 0.0628817314937 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 14.3799401198 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.3550499002 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.197005988 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.5979740519 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.32208582834 106% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 98.500998004 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.1389221557 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.