Some people think that governments should spend as much money as possible on developing or buying computer technology. Other people disagree and think that this money should be spent on more basic needs. Which one of these opinions do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Should government spend more money on the basic needs or buying or developing the computer technology? This is one of the most contentious issue and people express disparate opinions. From my perspective, any government should purchase more money on computer technology inasmuch as the following reasons.
First, any computer technology expeditiously performs the works such that it corroborates to enhance the basic needs. We can use this technology to ameliorate our basic needs. For example, in my village, many people were worked to their lands to fulfill the basic needs, without the technology myriad of people must be involved and the crops were damage do to lack of the knowledge of weather phenomena. However, when we set up the computer technology to predict the weather, then our village overcome that conundrum .
Second, computer technology is an expensive technology, a simple man can not offered that technology due to the inadequency of money. For instance, the basic need such as food, entertainment are the cheapable source. People facily watch the movies for the entertainment, grow the food in their lands and so on. But, they can not spend the money to buy and learn the computer. It takes lot of moeny and time. Hence, government should spent more money on computer technology.
Third, people become cognizant by using the computer technology. By observing the information to the diverse culture and activities, they can develop the society. People mind can be malleable by using the computer technology. For instacne, when an uneducated society’s people observed the vedios about the social plan, social reform through internet, then the people certainly changes and they want to become the educated which is an essential for that society. Without computer technology, reformation of a society is an grueling effort.
In conclusion, any government should spend more money on computer technology because it works expeditiously, it is expensive and people easily become cognizant by using this technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 517, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...then our village overcome that conundrum . Second, computer technology is an ex...
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Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'offer'
Suggestion: offer
...ensive technology, a simple man can not offered that technology due to the inadequency ...
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Line 9, column 525, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...technology, reformation of a society is an grueling effort. In conclusion, any ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, then, third, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35309973046 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.850638832 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490566037736 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 619.2 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.5794025525 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.347826087 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1304347826 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.60869565217 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36898367907 0.236089414692 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124586473339 0.076458572812 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14415313493 0.0737576698707 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239916768067 0.150856017488 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127768116051 0.0645574589148 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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