As we already stepped into 21st century, the era of technology. There are tremendous enhansement in every field by the inventors. Thus the society has expecting luxurious as well as safe life from this century. I concern that, this century must have is prespective towards transportation, pollution control and population control.
First of all, fast transportation facilities which cheaper rate must be developed. For example, the space x claim to implement a transporting facility with an average speed of 720 mph name "Hyperloop" by the year 2030. With such a rapid speed distance will become just a number and travelling will be convenient. A research says that average human waste 32% of life in travelling. Improvement in transport facilities and project life Hyperloop helps people to spare times to their loving ones.
Secondly, Environment Research Organisation prophecy that pollution will become reason behind world's end. Pollution control programme must be launched to save our future. For example, Germany had emphasized to used public transport to rome around. This result in 36% decreased air pollution in Germany in last 10 years. They are planning to control 80%-90% of greenhouse gases in next 20 years. To save next generation such actions must have been taken by every country.
Last but not the least, increasing growth rate of world population is non acceptable problem of this century. The storage of resource will not fulfill everyone's need if the growth rate is not control. Best example of country who has controlled its population is China. According to the Worldometers, yearly percentage change in china has reduced to 0.39% from 0.54% in last 5 year and probably will go to -0.43% in 2050.
The 21st century coincides myraid changes among which, improvement in transportation facilities will give a revolutionary face to the century. Beside this,its the time to have our prepestives towards environment. To conclude, the new era must not only have development in transportation facilities but also control population and pollution to give us better luxurious and safe life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36417910448 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07913016101 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594029850746 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.487239971 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6818181818 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2272727273 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22727272727 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126570109052 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343454387734 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392716429032 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0739384726888 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383280509323 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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