The debate whether or over the environment flooded with myriad of problems is an old one, with the attitude of people shifting throughout the debate over years. Proponents and opponents can make their cases to endorse their views on this contagious issue. In this essay , I will analyze this matter from both point of view and then draw a conclusion at the end. In my opinion, the onus should be on government.
There are numerous of arguments surrounding my viewpoint is that the nowadays environment is confronted with plethora biggest issue like pollution, smoking ,using non recyclable problems ,using over packaged materials, vehicles etc but the most important factor that needs to be considered relates to government deliberation which is totally marginalized. In other words, government can play a intrinsic role by imposing taxes in form of green tax and taxes on the emission of poisonous gases.
To elaborate further, few pertinent examples like various seminars to avoid smoking or run a non polluted vehicles can be taken into consideration.
On the other side of the fence, critics also believed that it should be our own responsibility to look after the environment. knowledge related to environmental problems should be proverbial. However, those who advocate this matter fail to see the picture in this large context.
The other school of thoughts is that green energy like solar panel and energy from water should be promoted to reduce pollution.
In the light of above discussion it is fair and justifiable to say that mitigating the pollution is not only the responsibility of government but also the individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'vehicle'?
Suggestion: vehicle
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, then, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18867924528 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94875149765 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615094339623 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.164403144 50.4703680194 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.583333333 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164396392658 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579885300407 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329740512362 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081253288445 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184872561965 0.0609392437508 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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