Over recent years, Globalization is the debatable issue amid the people, meanwhile, it has strewed all over the world for utilization of masses. However, it has certain pros and cons regarding to the influence among this society, is summarized below.
According to the Globalization, it is the prominent thing to people who are keen on to know about the alien culture and tradition, it is the wonderful opportunity to assimilate everything as per their wish. Furthermore, the commercial services like, apparels and house hold stuffs and other technical electronic items from the foreign countries are availing at our local market in cheap rate with high quality for the usage of all people, which lift the standards of living. In addition to this, multinational industries are forming new factories in rural areas for avoiding shortage of products, which affords plenty of employment opportunity to the youngsters and also the economic condition of country is enhancing substantially.
On the other hand, to reckon the amount of import items are being a daunting issue to the indigenous retailers, who are the existing top sellers in their respective area, and they are directly affect by this international trade due to the lacking of modern technologies. Besides it may destroy the ancient culture and tradition through penetrate the western culture among this society, and also, it will pave the way to extinct of local languages and identification of community. Eventually, the Government and the civilians will utterly forced to rely on other country’s product to replete their requirements.
To conclude this, it seems to me that even though the world wide integration is seemingly a great successful feature to the society, but, it have certain negative impact on people’s life. If it solved in future, then it will be the ideal thing in this globe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, then, while, as for, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25333333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00241384371 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.3343802262 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.6 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0970879580794 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359532206094 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319591130962 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630049118518 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371065423873 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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