What are the benefits of living in big cities, as opposed to rural areas? What are the problems of rural areas and how can they be solved
Undoubtedly, enormous issues occurred for the people living in the rural areas whereas they do not face any problem while residing in city instead they get huge advantage. I will discuss what kind of problems is faced by people while living in outskirt areas, and how these can be solved. I will also explain positive aspects of living in urban cities.
Medical facilities are better in the cities comparable to rural areas. The treatment of chronic diseases such as cancer, TB and other diseases is far better than the hospitals available in the rural areas. It is because medical practitioners, who are in rural areas, are migrated to cities for the betterment of their career. Therefore, it is believed that staying in cities is better than outskirt areas.
In addition to this, education is quite essential for an individual in order to delve solutions of the complex issues of the world. In cities pupils get good education because of the availability of experts in cities. In rural areas, experts do not believe to stay; therefore, the pupils do not acquire skills required to compete with rivals.
There are several solutions to solve education and medical issues in the rural areas. For this, the government may spent hefty sum of money to improve the conditions. Fringe benefits may be given by the government to the doctors and teachers so that they could stay in the rural areas.
Thus, I believe, non availability of medical experts and teachers in the rural area creates enormous issues for the local people thereby they do not live in rural areas. As per e, if the local governments ponder on this issue, both the problems can easily be resolved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, in addition, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90459363958 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55059064085 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505300353357 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3065868757 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5333333333 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296482275739 0.242375264174 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950042346519 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759073400771 0.071462118173 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168033947775 0.151781067708 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101364222675 0.0609392437508 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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