Undoubtedly, Education is the peerless thing in this globe for making people’s life fruitful. However, certain people think it is for only to youth, but, in this fast pace world, it is pivotal thing beyond the age limit and the reasons are summarized below.
First and foremost, according to the study, indeed, it is partaking the major role on masses life through dictating their way of living standard, and prominent yard stick to esteem the individuality. Further more, the advent of new technology seduces the people to know about the unanimous things to retain their existing stance in this competitive community beyond the age limit, because, the new things will not be wait for anyone, then to originate this precious life to shine, it is essential should be an up to date. Besides, it is regard as the significant thing to evaluate the people’s reputation and reverence from the others. After all, in the present scenario, it is impossible without know about the technology and new things. For instance, the famous news paper Hindu, yesterday published the article on how the past generation people confront the problem of lacking knowledge in new developments, which is near to 30 percent and illustrated how it separates them from this society.
On the other hand, it is deniable face that education should be for youth, because, this is the appropriate age to assimilate everything. But their childhood onwards, they are started to learn about their circumstance like How live, speak and so on. These are also the kind of learning. So, education is the life long task till the upshot people will learn new things without their knowledge by the coercion of this society’s standard.
To sum up this, it seems to me that learning the new skills is the infinite task to people, who want to live the victorious life beyond the age limit, so, age is not the obstacle to study.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, so, then, after all, for instance, kind of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9625 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72137804017 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546875 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.8611685679 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.333333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0899966351918 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385846167205 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038480585825 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0667866370995 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444732243684 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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